Space included a trip to the magnificent Flinders Ranges
and an amazing hot air balloon ride over the mountains at sunrise.
The space worked... kind of. I wasn't fulfilling the promise of the start because I'd rushed my ending. I managed to tweak a few things, completely change something else and now I think it's the better.
But I want to *know*...
How do you know when the story is done and it's time to let it go into the world (more CPs, beta readers, agent etc)?
=)
